is this a good resume for a job?

im looking into a job that has to do with sales or little bit on customer service side.
i try one of those “build your resume here” sites but they give little or no infomation on how.

im fairly good at repairing computers, and have a strong knowlegde of software and hardware base.
i also have strong knowledge on electronics/phones (what company is it, what model, whats the difference, where it came from, what they have).
i have a good knowledge about cars too (same as electronics, but not a tech/mech person)

so here it is:
(NAME AND CONTACT IS IN THE MIDDLE, YAHOO ANSER WONT PUT IT IN THE MIDDLE)

MY NAME
MY ADRESS
Aurora, CO 80011
Home: MY NUMBER
Mobile/Google Voice: MY NUMBER
MY EMIAL

CAREER OBJECTIVE:
Entry level, retail sales and sales associate

EDUCATION:
MY SCHOOL, Aurora, Colorado, USA.
GPA average of 3.5 received. Diploma on May 17th 2011.

SPECIAL PREPARATION:
Completed courses in English, Honors Math, Science, Art, Word Processing, and history
Able to follow directions precisely, safely and accurately with no misconceptions

AWARDS/ACHIEVEMENT:
•Student of the month, October 2007
•Top 50 student, 2007-2011

SKILLS:
•Microsoft Word,
•MS Excel,
•MS PowerPoint,
•Adobe Photoshop,
•Adobe Premier,
•Internet skills,
•Computer software/hardware knowledge.
•Electronics knowledge.
•Some computer repair.
•Automotive knowledge.
•Able to sale products faster then most people.

VOLUNTEER EXPERIENCE:
Safari Seconds Thrift Store, 414 Broadway Denver, CO 80203
Varies, July 2011-Augest 2011
Responsibility:

•Moving heavy loads
•Organizing supplies
•Stocking supplies

JOB EXPERIENCE:
Family Asia Market, 8800 E. Colfax Ave, CO 80220
Varies, August 2009-September 2011
Responsibility:
•Dropping off loads from truck
•Organizing supplies
•Some cashier work
•Sales

OTHER ACTIVATES:
•Driver’s education, 2008-2008
•After school computer class, 2009-2009
•Picasso Art club, 2009-2011
•Some computer repair, 2009-present
•Film making, 2008-present
•Film editing (basic), 2008-present

LANGUAGES:
Fluent in English, Some Japanese

GIVE ME SOME POINTERS.
WHAT DO I NEED TO INCLUDE, WHAT DO I NEED TO TAKE OUT, IS THIS EVEN A RESUME AT ALL?

Chosen Answer:

I think this is a good resume. You really focused on your target as a sales-related person. Anyways, I think you don’t need to mention Other Activities section unless they are needed in the career you’d like.

Include your achievements or awards regarding the career you’d like. A plus factor for a resume is it’s appearance so make sure that it would be presentable but not overdecorated. Use lever arch files to protect your resume if you need a hard copy of it. Here is a link for some cheap lever arch files if you would like.
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on: 15th November 11



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